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This is truthfully something I haven't spent to much time but I do plan to edit it much more. Thank you so much for your advice!

This is truthfully something I haven't spent to much time but I do plan to edit it much more. Thank you so much for your advice!

Penelope, I like the work you've done here. You captured complicated thoughts and emotions and put them into words. This type of writing can be difficult and you have handled ...

Thank you a lot for your review! I probably should have looked at my writing a little closer but I'm learning. Thank you for the review!

I'm not a poet and I don't plan to be able to try and critic the writing of one but I would like to give a few comments on it. ...

I'm not that much into poems but this is quite a nice poem.

I truthfully really love what your getting at. I expected something about Society being crude and mean like the way many people talk about but you touch on it in ...

This is quite a beautiful piece of writing. I love the shock you get at the end. Please keep writing because this is quite a good piece of writing.

This is quite a beautiful piece of writing. I love the shock you get at the end. Please keep writing because this is quite a good piece of writing.