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I really liked this poem. Like you said, it is pretty raw, but in a way that's good, it's just bare emotion. However a bit of fine tuning may improve ...

I agree with the above comment, I think a bit of imagery would really improve this poem. Like instead of saying things straight think of other ways to make it ...

I really liked this poem, I think it creates a really vivid picture in the readers mind and I especially loved the second last stanza. I do agree with Hibiscus ...

I don't have any criticisms I thought it was great. I loved the way the whole poem seemed to flow like one continuous line, and the images were great. The ...

Hey, I agree with Cresent in that there could be more detail and depth, but even as a poem on its own it's pretty good. There is one line though, ...

I really like the idea of this poem, I like the images that you used like the "flowers dancing gracefully". My only criticism is that some of the lines don't ...

I think it's really good.You'd never know we were basically the same age and grew up together because I don't know what half of those words mean! I think that ...

I like the first and second stanzas a lot. They conjured up a lot of different images for me and had catchy rhythms. However, I felt slightly let down when ...

There are certain parts of this poem that I really do enjoy. For example, "scars don't erase", only 3 words but they hold a lot of meaning. The poem was ...

It didn't really flow very well for a the moment it sounds more like a story.A good story doesn't really look that good.It's all in a kind of big lump.(sorry ...

While I feel that maybe the overall presentation was rather too dramatic for my taste, I appreciate the use of the adjectives. It needs a little tweaking here and there ...