IvoryRose

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Great way to show love. It is something to think about. Would you still believe in love if love was a regular person? Would it still be as popular and ...

Never mind I read the about section, I am dumb. -.-

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Hello I’m IvoryRose and I bring thou a review. So I interpreted the poem as a person that feels like an outcast. That because they don’t understand how to be ...

Hey Snowmonkey IvoryRose here for a review. I love the religious ties to the poem. I’ve been working on a story in which the main character is fearing judgement day ...

Oh it%u2019s okay, your feedback is always important to me and poetry like all types of art is up to interpretation. Thanks again! :)

Thanks Steggy and the reason I added the last stanza was pretty personal. My grandfather was the only father figure I ever had and he died when I was nine. ...

Thank you! And thanks to Grim as well! :)

Sorry I accidentally submitted my review twice.

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Interesting story so far. It's good how you are giving time for the story to develop, but keep pacing in mind. At first the story was going very fast, then ...

I have no idea why the stanza spaces I make are not saving. *flips table* Anyways sorry about that still learning. 0.o

Glad you liked it!

Thanks for your feedback!

Yo idk what happened to my reply.

Yeah on the draft the stanzas separated but when I posted it for some reason it didn%u2019t. Next time I%u2019ll make sure to double check! Thank you for the review ...

Yeah on the draft the stanzas separated but when I posted it for some reason it didn%u2019t. Next time I%u2019ll make sure to double check! Thank you for the review ...