IvoryPhoenix

Very good, very good, a poem I thoroughly enjoyed, full of meaning and symbolism (though I'm not sure what half the things symbolize! xD). I definitely did notice the "broken" ...

This was sincerely beautiful. . . I feel like it could be a magnet on my fridge or a poster or something. I have to say I LIKED how you ...

Okay, I'm not even sure why, but I REALLY REALLY love this!! I agree with Kaitlin---please don't stop writing poetry! There is such depth in the very few words of ...

The title of this poem really pulled me in---very poetic, very clever. And the first two lines definitely were a great way to start. The words ran together smoothly, almost ...

I kid you not, the first stanza left me open-mouthed, and as I continued to read I just became more and more impressed. The imagery, the way you phrase things. ...

I think TheWalkinDude hit a key point when mentioning that the poem was lacking figurative language, which makes for a less poetic and enticing read. Over all it was an ...

This is great! I love how each stanza begins with the same phrase, followed by a mood-setter completely different from the previous stanza. It's short, sweet, and to the point, ...