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Re: Sea Ballet
I could definately learn something from your use of methaphors! I like the poem!
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Ferris wheel
I like your poem.. it was easy to read and it was fun. Even though the last 5 lines were different from the others it still was a match. I ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Music
I've got 5 words for you: I LOVE this poem, AMAZING! I love music, without music I can't live and this poem tells exactly how I feel about music! I ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Frozen Love, Heated Pain
Wonderful story! I love it! You're into the story from the first sentence till the last AMAZING!!!!
Aug 27, 2010 -
Re: Shooting Heroin (14+ Perhaps)
I like the poem, pretty tough topic, but you showed feelings and stuff very well in this poem! Keep on writing stuff like this. Nathalie
Aug 27, 2010 -
Re: Confusion
Next time I'll use punctuation ;)
Aug 26, 2010