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Hi Ryan! I really enjoyed your story! It made me feel as if I was in Ancient China. I really enjoyed your characters, you seemed to understand the concept of ...

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Hi Cameron! I really enjoyed reading your story! It made me feel as if I was in Ancient China. I really liked the characters. You really seemed to understand the ...

Hi Dylan! I had a great time reading your story -in other words, I enjoyed it. I really liked the historical elements you included as well as your characters. However, ...

Hi Phillip! I really enjoyed your story. It made me feel in the moment. I liked that you included dialogue and used it appropriately. Perhaps you could correct any grammar ...

Hi Marishke! I really enjoyed reading your story. I liked that in your story, Yin and Yang were living things. I also liked how you're story started off with dialogue. ...