Iridescent

I have a question. Did you write this dry eyed? It was truly a beautiful piece, really was. I normally don't have the attention span to finish pieces on the ...

Hiya. Well, first of, I liked this. It was pretty relatable and down to earth. I enjoyed reading it, and I also think you could go a bit further with ...

First off, I enjoyed reading this. It was good enough to make me want to keep reading, and it was a spin on the average stuff you get on the ...

I really enjoyed reading this :) Just a point- "So tell me, dear, how did it end like this?" I felt a bit disappointed by the ending. Probably just me, ...

First off, I've got to say it, I love the title. It's so...poetic. Looking at the below review, the second line here- "against baseboards, palms down in a red grip ...

Besides the few mentioned errors and such, I feel as though you could have given us more. I mean, you're writing about a very dramatic time. You covered it beautifully ...

Wonderful poem! Just a little nitpicking...I wasn't sure if when you said "And in the soft glow of the pallid moon,they quit the sky;wishes forsaken" You meant 'quit the sky' ...

Overall, the piece was ok. It basically seem liked two girls passing note. I feel as though more feeling and emotion could have been shown within the actions of the ...