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Wow. This was a really nice read. These are just one of those pieces that you read that you can definitely relate to. Or at least for me it is. ...

I really liked this piece. It's filled with a lot of emotion. From this i got the feeling of complete defeat. Like a loss of wanting to strive and stay ...

Because Beckiw and Cadi most likely summed up everything that was needed to be fixed, i don't have anything to add to that. Anyhow, I found this oddly interesting. I ...

Good effort, however, it needs some improvement here and there. The story line is quite cliche and underdeveloped. Put more background into the characters and really bring them to life. ...

I really enjoyed reading this. You really captured that feeling of an unrequited love. I love the sense of imagery that was used and the way you described things. It ...

This was quite a nice read. Kept me captivated the whole time. It was quite sad however. I find it quite amusing how people really don't care. You only ever ...

I like how this can be viewed in different ways. When i read this, i think about a child who grows up only to learn that the world isn't as ...

This was really good. It's also really relate-able. To play the "Heartbreak Game" is a horrible thing but many of us never truly realize we're playing it until the very ...

This was just absolutely amazing. A great piece to read. Everything flowed nicely together and it tied off nicely at the end. I like your choice of words and the ...

This was a nice read. I feel like you could have dug a little deeper however. You also have a few spelling and punctuation errors. For example, "Like he air ...

There are many people i feel this way about. Narrow-mindedness is a horrible thing. "You think you know what you see? Like you say I’m troubled youth, Little do you ...