IntelligentQuill

I really like this poem. It gave me a heroic outlook and the feeling of love 'somewhere'. I'm not sure where I go that from. The stanzas flowed together nicely. ...

Thanks for the advice! I took a look at the story again and gave it a small buff.

Thanks for the feedback! I think I might remaster this.

Thanks for the review Lee! I meant for 'sleep' to be 'asleep', I literately saw it as I posted it on here and I'm like, "I'm sure someone will notice. ...

Really good for someone of your age. Reading this reminds me of pirate adventures or a grand love story.

I just started reading this and I have to say, nice start to the story.

Yea I didn't put too much thought into the writing. It's sort of like an idea I could use later on. I also didn't know about spelling check and stuff. ...