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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Kingdom of Nine

    Thanks so much for the review! I guess I missed those... Maybe at the time I meant them to be their own sentences, but you have made me realize that ...

    Mar 9, 2015
  • Other » Dramatic, Horror Re: are you going to kill me?

    I love the way you write, it flows a lot like the way I do so I love to read something in this way :D My only thing is (and ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Unstoppable Force and the Immovable Object

    THANK YOU FOR NOT LETTING ME BE THE ONLY ONE!!!!!

    Mar 1, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Literature Re: Writer

    Thank you so much for your wonderful review! I agree with everything you but picked and I will take it all into account in my future writings. Thank you so ...

    Feb 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Late

    Thank you so much for your wonderful review! Your encouragement is very much appreciated. I am glad you enjoyed this. Happy Writing!

    Feb 16, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Twenty Words Free Verse

    Thanks for your wonderful suggestions! I will certainly take them all into consideration and you have given me a lot to think about! Thank you so much! Happy Writing!

    Feb 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Late

    Thanks! Happy Writing!

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Late

    Thank you for the review! I understand what you are pointing out in the last one, but could you clarify a bit on the first two examples? Thanks! Happy Writing!

    Feb 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: My Tears Are Held

    Thank you for your wonderful comment! It means a lot to me :) Happy Writing!

    Feb 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: My Tears Are Held

    Thanks for your wonderful comment! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Happy Writing!

    Feb 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: My Tears Are Held

    Thank you for the review and wonderful suggestions! To answer your last question, it is my father rebuking I Am who is God. Once again, thank you for your wonderful ...

    Feb 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: My Tears Are Held

    Thanks for the review! I wrote this in tears, so I'm sorry for the missed rhyming words. I appreciate you pointing them out, I will look into finding better words ...

    Feb 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: My Tears Are Held

    Thank you for the wonderful review! I wrote this while in tears, so I just kind of rambled on (sorry for length) and then the rhyme I understand what you ...

    Feb 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: My Tears Are Held

    I will look into it. I wrote this while in tears, so sorry for any messing up :/ but thank you for the wonderful comment! Happy Writing!

    Feb 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: My Tears Are Held

    Thanks for the comment, I hope to see your review soon then too! :) Happy Writing!

    Feb 8, 2015


I like to create sympathy for my characters, then set the monsters loose.
— Stephen King