Insomnia

Hey, Charlie. :) I said I'd give you a crit, but there's no spelling or grammar errors here. They're usually what I focus on. :P It's an interesting start, and ...

Hey. :) How've you been? "Hey." she said. You need a comma after Hey, not a full stop. Eric gave a snort resembling laugh That sounds strange. Maybe "a snort ...

You know, I think I've read pretty much every book Stephen King has done - except for the Dark Tower series. I don't know why, but I just can't get ...

Hey, Church. You asked for a crit in the chat so I guess this is it. ;) Don't mind if it's a bit harsh. Just trying to help. xD In ...

Hey. :) One of the only copmplaints I have to make is about the length. It isn't really long enough for us to get any real feel for the characters ...

Hey! :D I've been waiting for this chapter for... I don't know how long. Seriously. Memory issues, but it was worth the wait. i enjoyed it, like the last one. ...

Hey. :D You asked me for a read over, so... here I am! I'm just reading over this now, and I'm impressed. It's really riveting, keeps me reading. I've only ...

hey Ginger. How are you? :) This was good. It had detailed desciption, which always helps a reader into a scene. I think it's too short, though. I wanted more. ...

I know nothing about scripts, so I can't help much, but isn't it supposed to be guilty by reason of insanity? Means they done it, but it's not their fault, ...

Hey, Lucy. I like this. :) There's just a couple of random complaints. Not mistakes, just pet peeves of mine lol. the kid from down the road No idea why, ...

Hey, Andy. First off, I have have to say that this is awesome without any editing. Your descriptions are amazing. I've just been trying to focus on dialogue, lately. xD ...

Hey, JC. :D I noticed a few things here that you done, mostly just the same sort of stuff though. Near the start, you use she and her a heap ...

Well, I had a crit typed up for this ages ago, before that post eating monster ate it, and now everyone's gone through and said it all. So, all I ...

Hey, JC. :D I just realised that I haven't read POD in a while, and then suddenly there was a new part lol. I'm not sure if the things I ...

Hey, Snoink. Good to see yws back up! :D Anyway, I just found this experimenting to see if portfolios worked. :o And they do! :D I loved it, and oddly ...