Insomnia

Hey, Clever. Sorry it took me a little while. I was distracted. I'll do this for you before I have to go. :) To start, the niceties: I like it. ...

Hey, Lily. You wanted the faster one, and so here it is. ;) It's an interesting piece, and I want to read more. I haven't gotten too much of an ...

Hey, Wic. I see that you've had quite a few in-depth reviews already, so I'm going to focus on characterisation and dialogue. In the beginning, your narrator almost comes across ...

Hi, Wic. Found your post in my Will Review for Food thread, so here I am. This is an interesting start to a novel, and I will review the next ...

Hey, Lily. Sorry it took me so long to get around to this. I see it only got a couple of critiques, though, so I hope you won't mind a ...

Hey, Luc. This is a great start to the story. I really love the subtle things you've done to characterise Bailey. It helps the reader get into it and see ...

Hey! I've just checked my Will Review For Food thread for the first time this year. It's probably a bit late for you to use this review for any good, ...

Hey. :) I'm here to do your review. I'm not reading over the other recent ones, in case they bias me, so please excuse me if I repeat things. The ...

Hey, pop. :) I thought I'd come and give this a critique, because no one's found it yet. They'll be here soon, I expect. For now, I'll have a look ...

Hey, Heather. :) I thought I'd get your crit done tonight. I'll get straight into it, and give my general impressions later. Chocolate used to seem much too expensive and ...

Hey, Jamie. This is one of the most enoyable things I've read on here in a while. You had good dialogue, some interesting characters with complex relationships, and the beginnings ...

Hey, Brad. This was pretty perfect in terms of the story. I struggled to find anything negative to comment on. I do have a nit-pick or two, though. it would ...

xD Well, I've just gotten on and seen your piece on the front page. I was going to PM you and comment, but I guess I'll look through it here ...

Hey. Thanks for posting in my thread. :) Here's your critique. I may have to post a little of it and come back to finish it tomorrow, as I don't ...

Hey. We haven't met before, I don't think. :) This was an interesting piece. It was a bit short for me to get any impressions. It could use a lot ...