Inlovewithwriting

Okay this is a good short story But it could be better When writing you don't want to keep using the same words over and over again. "As another soft ...

I loved this poem, it's really good. Keep writing like this and your work will go far. I could personally relate, mainly because I'm a victim of bullying. This poem ...

Wow! This was really good. I found it heart breaking and sweet. Okay so I probably should go in and make comments on the mistakes But there was none, so ...

This was a well written poem. There weren't any grammatical errors So that's totally awesome The narrator clearly gets their point across. I didn't catch in rambling You don't want ...

Okay I won't be long I compete and share stories a lot, and the guy who helps always tells me Not to use the same words too many times. It ...