InkyLovesWriting

This poem is nice. I love the concept and the imagery you've used here is brilliant. Though I do think this poem should be extended to give it more depth. ...

I love the eerie atmosphere you've created with this poem. Some of the imagery you've used here is very effective. I particuarly like how you've used, "like a child playing ...

I really like this! The description is brilliant- it really puts some vivid images in my head. I like the fact you wrote it in the 2nd person; it gives ...

This is brilliant! It's really emotional, the imagery is wonderful, and the pace is nice. I especially like the line 'blood to drip, drip, drip'- I love the repetition there. ...

It's great that you've written a story like this. I'm not lesbian, and I don't have any friends who are, but I strongly support homosexuality. I used to be Christian ...

I like this a lot. You've used some nice imagery in here, especially with, "so now I face the music of the rhythm I made", and your rhyming is good ...