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Thanks a lot :)

Thanks for the review :) I wanted to put stanzas in, but I've only just figured out how to! *Duh* thanks a lot for your comments!

Thanks a lot for the lovely review :)

Thanks a lot :) However, the poem actually does rhyme. I agree with what you say about making the poem into stanzas, but I'm not sure how to do that ...

Thanks :) And I understand what you're saying about the last couple of lines. You make a good suggestion!

Thanks a lot! :)

Thanks a lot for the review, I get what you're saying about repeating the word "nothing" it would make it stand out a little more.

Thank youuuu :)

Thanks a lot for your comments :)

Thanks a lot :)

Thanks! And that line "longed for limelight" annoys me a lot, but I couldn't think of a way to put in "the limelight" without ruining the flow of the poem. ...

Thanks for your review :) I get what you're saying about the difference between this and more artistic poems, and will take your comments onboard.

Thanks for the review- what you say makes complete sense :) I will have a think about how to fix it...

Oh thanks :) You are spot on about those spelling mistakes- I wish I'd noticed them earlier! Thanks for the review x

I understand :)