Indrashish

Soo sweet!!!! :*

Thank you so much for this review! I'll try to implement the ideas that you have so kindly shared with me...thank you once again! :)

Thank you so much for that review!! I'm so glad I joined truly has served as a superb platform for me....thank you so much for this....I will try to correct ...

Truthfully, I have no idea about type of poems, I just write when I feel like writing.... :)

This helped a lot!! Thank you so much Audy!!! :D

Thank you!! :) And I'll surely keep that in mind next time!! :D

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Thank you soooo much!!! Such invaluable advice! About the missing words like 'had' , I probably had overlooked those while I was trying to revise my work.... and no, I ...

Thank you! :) And sure!

See, the thing is that I am born and brought up in India and the English system and spellings are quite different from those that is probably followed by you.. ...

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No..it's not at all weird! It's wonderful! And thanks again! :)

Thank you so much Jon for that review!! It was way more than "a little helpful". And about that second part, what I meant was that Rahul and Patrick kiss ...

Amazing! I must say your poem is indeed unique. It gives a feeling of reality. I really wonder what a guy like this must feel when he reads this!! Anyway, ...