IndiaRubber

This poem is wonderful. With the exception of a few simple spelling/punctuation/capitalization errors, the writing is flawless. It is genuine, unique, and full of powerful imagery. There is a captivat

I like this poem, and I feel many people can relate to it. I like the simplicity of it, and I especially like the beginning... "I am beginning a new ...

Laying should be lying, to be grammatically correct. Very haunting poem. Powerful imagery. Compelling. I like it.

Nice flow. I like the attitude of it. I generally don't enjoy comedic poetry, but I liked this and I like it's simplicity. And I like the "cause I'd like ...

You have chosen an intense and deeply personal, deeply emotional and thought provoking topic to write about. I admire that. With a subject like this-suicide-there is so much potential for ...