IncohesiveScribbles

That makes A Lot more sense now.

Thanks Tuesday I'll make sure to fix those errors.

Thank you for the review! I haven't read the book you're talking about but I'll have to take a look at it. I like the proverb as well.

Ok that makes more sense!

Thanks for explaining it. That makes more sense.

Possible titles could be "Death's Ship", "Down With The Ship", or "Seasick" I don't know, I'm not very good at titles either.

Thanks for the review! Love your avatar, Katara is my favorite though ;)

That's alright happens to me too sometimes. Thanks for the review by the way!

Thanks for the review! I know it would be nice to be a longer poem, but I feel it reflects how the harmonies can come and go in an instant. ...

I love your avatar picture by the way

Thanks for the review! I love when a review has humor as well as critique and your's contained both. I like the title mirror mirror, and thanks for the info ...

Thanks for the review. I'll try to play around with the ending you gave me.

Thanks for the review even though you are from Team Why. This is in my perspective, and I know appearances aren't everything but that doesn't mean I don't care a ...

If you have any different ideas for the title or how to make the ending a little less awkward please let me know.

Thanks for the information. I'm not sure if I'll change this poem because it was written on a whim. But I will definitely keep this in mind for future poems.