Incognito

But to actually review this piece, mon cherie, I shall go forth unto the dark dismal world of poetry in which I am not totally efficient at, but you requested. ...

I disagree Vyper. There is such a thing called poetic license which allows writers when writing poetry to use any kind of format they want including the lack of capitalization. ...

It was horrible. loljk

It was horrible. (I'll review it later.)

Ah, okay. You can keep this here for now, or if you want to, you can ask a Mod to move it for you. It sounds like a great concept. ...

I thank you both for your reviews! They were exceedingly helpful, to make a note of that. Dreamwalk, you are my critic for life almost surely. xD You say my ...

I am going to review this when I get home from volunteering at the Animal Shelter. It sounds interesting. 8) ~Incognito

Thanks for the review Elite! That made me hit my head when I read that I did the 'had had' thing. It was once a mjor problem of mine, and ...

I double posted. Whoops.

Thanks all of you for your reviews. They are incredibly helpful. ;3 I appreciate you taking your time to do this. ~Incognito

Thanks Adna! xD You are certainly great at poem reviews. And thank you thunderwolf190. I actually had it that before but I changed it to match the first stanza part. ...

I thank both of you for your comments. Aloha Juice --> I know my piece may seem bland, and I understand that not much praise can be given, but I ...

I am going to review this when I get home from school. I can't wait to read more of your writing. ;) ~Incognito

Lauren, I shall correct you. I live right near a lake, Lake Ontario to be exact, and trust me, there is a tide, and the waves can get extremely large ...

Don't worry. That was an excellent review. It is much appreciated. I was more worried about my occurence of 'slightly' a bit too much. I tend to write that and ...