Incognito

I liked it. Nice short and easy to read. I myself do writing prompts too, and find them awfully addicting though the nonsense I sometimes write scares me. Oh dear, ...

Hello. (: Im not a very nit-picky person and I am feeling kinda lazy right now, so don't mind my not going after your grammar and punctuation anything of the ...

I disagree with Nate on the fact that you should focus on one or two scenes. Yes, it is a bit tricky to follow, so maybe make the transitions more ...

Bonjour lily! Its good to see you again. I’m still trying to get back into this reviewing game, but huzzah! I shall try! First off, I noticed a couple of ...

Bonjour Nike! I’m Incognito, and to be frank, I haven't reviewed in a while so bear with me as I try to get back in the game. This was an ...

I think I kind of disagree, careless. I believe it is meant to be a bit confusing because it is displaying that this character is mentally unstable and the confusion ...

I actually indeed did like this piece. Dudette, your writi has gotten much better since I last read something of yours. I am not going to go into grammar and ...

Hey Mentalist. As promised, I shall review your marvellous piece of work. I hope my review will seem slightly up to par of those of YWO. ;) Shall we get ...

Wow, Ed. I was moderately surprised at just the passion of your poem. You definitely get that emotional contrast and I can really feel empathy for the person who feels ...

Jabbs, you are my hero.

Hey there! I am Incognito and I am going to review your story today. I read the first chapter so don’t worry, I know what is going down. ;) Also, ...

Hey foxfire! I have decided, because I have returned from my long departure from YWS, I would review an old friends work. ;) Just to let you know, I am ...

Hello Olya Prepodobnaya! I am Incognito, and I am going to take a gander at your lovely piece. I hope you don't mind. I haven't read the first part in ...

Hey! I am Incognito and I am going to review your story today. Mind though, I am too lazy to read the other reviewers nit-picks so you may get some ...

Hey there! I am Incognito, and I am here to review your work today. ;) Shall we begin? I. Nit-Picking I couldn’t be more excited to become a father. ~The ...