In_the_Moonlight

I loved this, KJ. The only thing I thought was missing was like that "wow" factor. If that makes any sense at all. Um.....what I mean is the chapter was ...

Okay this story was just plain creepy. I would've liked it a lot more if it was a tad longer as well. I really wasn't sure if the narrator was ...

Wow. I liked this; you're not insane for listening to one of your chatacters. It happens. Plus I loved the ending although it was sad, it was unexpected. People, like ...

KJ- FABULOUS! Okay this was the next best thing, but I'll still be waiting for Violet. As long as you remeber to try and work on it I'd appreciate that. ...

I really like this story so far and I can't wait to see it evolve. The girls at my high school pretty just made my life a living hell. I ...

Wow this was well written. Although I'd been expecting a sexual scene like you warned I still wasn't prepared for the graphicness. I mean it was just kind of like ...

This was a short chapter in my eyes. Good but nonetheless short. I can't wait for more I couldn't find any spelling or grammar errors, but i think there was ...

This was so so so so so so so so.....etc.- COOOOL! No not just cool.Awesome-epic-wondrous. Thank you so much for continuing to write this story. Oh, and thanx for agreeing ...

This was really great. I can't believe this is my first time reading your work. I couldn't pick up on any grammar or spelling errors. Gradually, the grey passed but ...

That was so adorable. I was laughing so hard when he talked about his adventure of the day. Vick really does seem like a good guy for Becca but then ...

This was a shorter chapter then usual. Good, but short. I was sort of expecting a little more action and got something totally different. The whole chapter was basically her ...

I'm in shock. I hope with a burning passion that Genny doesn't stay with Jeff. I don't know why but I think Mark is a better choice even if he ...

KJ- Wow. That. Was. AWESOME! This was beautifully written, like most of your work. The whole chapter I was feeling so much suspense and pressure it was killing me. Although ...

Holy Crud! I loved this! It's a bit cliche here and there but I'm a sucker for cliche love. Especially if it sound or relates to anything that has to ...

Oh. My. Gosh. That was such a good chapter; way to continue it. I loved how you smoothly slided the point of view from Rosaline to Rosetta, it made the ...