In_the_Moonlight

Hmmm, very interesting. However, I'm a bit confused. How exactly has Mariadelle come to be in the woods? Why is she dressed in tavern clothes again? I'm guessing yoou'll fill ...

In a world where corruption and deception lie at every corner a 16 year old girl has to prove her innocence and fulfil her destiny along with 5 others. All ...

This was a good story overall. I do have one problem, though. There really isn't much spacing in between paragraphs. Not that it's necessary, but the words seem to clump ...

My gosh, this was very good. Actually as soon as I read the first sentence I just couldn't read the rest without knowing what happened before it. So with that ...

Hi thechocolatewritingcat (I love your name) This piece, although quite short, was very interesting and well written. I don't want to repeat anything ScarlettRose said so I'm just going to ...

Hey Ashleylee I'm just gonna get right into the review and then tell you my full opinion. I pressed on my brakes and nearly got out. But then, my better ...

I loved this, and I'm happy to see you back on YWS again, KJ. The mystery, suspense, and reality to your story drew me in. It was really good. However, ...

Hey Lucy! I actually read this a while back but totally forgot to review it. I loved this a lot and can't wait for more. I couldn't find any big ...

Wow this was excellent and I hope to read more of your work. I was sucked in from the first word to the very last. AMAZING! :D However there was ...

Hey KJ, This was simply wonderful and it makes me so happy to know this is Violet related. It was a great start to what I know will be an ...

Wow, this is magnificent and I could totally understand what the narrator felt. I would write more but I have to go eat dinner so bye and keep up the ...

This was good, but I think it needs something. I flew again to the same spot I had been for days, watching the girl grief . grief should be grieve ...

Oh, I loved this. It was really creative and funny, but it was very rushed and seemed like it took minutes to write. Try to make sure that when you ...

This was very good. Now into my review.... My mouth's apage with boredom My eyes are wet, as glass Once again, as I so oftem am I'm sitting in my ...

You must have at least two reviews before you post and I'm not sure but I think you kinda have to be 13 to be on the...site... Waking up for ...