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uhh okay.

Oh sorry, i got confused, cos that's how I used to have it.. I dont like adding them cos I feel like it disrupts my flow

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I like to start off by saying thank you, and I agree with you; see I wrote this before I knew that, in poetry, the comma's constitute a pause and ...

Hey, Thanks! I appreciate the feedback ! uhm, Do you know what parts seem cliche to you? :)

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Not all poems need rhyme scheme but they need to have rhythm.. You can write however you want to write, I just wouldn't categorize it as a poem.

I agree with what you say about commas; its suppose to constitute a pause and often times disrupts the flow of anything written. ^^ support

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Hey, since I really liked your piece I will be harsher then normal, so take my criticism lightly! It is great in its twist and turns taking the reader here ...