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Re: Hold Your Breath
Well first of all, I really like it, and I believe you did well in it !! I like it was brief, but was touching me to a level, I ...
Nov 8, 2012 -
Re: understand me when I open myself to you
wanna say that I really like it and I absolutely adore this... " Understand that you are in the bones of me, the shifts of my weight, the twist of ...
Nov 8, 2012 -
Re: understand me when I open myself to you
wanna say that I really like it and I absolutely adore this... " Understand that you are in the bones of me, the shifts of my weight, the twist of ...
Nov 8, 2012 -
Re: Never Summon Without Protectin
Well... I liked the way it started " “Remember,” Sergeant Linda had barked, “You’re in hiding. That means you keep things on the DL. No hulking out, tangling with magical ...
Nov 4, 2012 -
Re: Never Summon Without Protectin
Well... I liked the way it started " “Remember,” Sergeant Linda had barked, “You’re in hiding. That means you keep things on the DL. No hulking out, tangling with magical ...
Nov 4, 2012 -
Re: Hidden in the Closet
The crack of my closet door watches me as if it were scared of me, as if I might see something I'm not supposed to; each night as my lightswitch ...
Nov 3, 2012 -
Re: Hidden in the Closet
The crack of my closet door watches me as if it were scared of me, as if I might see something I'm not supposed to; each night as my lightswitch ...
Nov 3, 2012 -
Re: Perfection
Why can't I be who I want to be? Who is 'I'? Who is 'Me'? All these words you throw around, I'll take every one without a sound. These walls ...
Nov 3, 2012 -
Re: I Will Wait
I told him that, even if it took the rest of my life, I would wait for him. I intend to keep my promise. I told him that, no matter ...
Nov 3, 2012 -
Re: I Will Wait
I told him that, even if it took the rest of my life, I would wait for him. I intend to keep my promise. I told him that, no matter ...
Nov 3, 2012 -
Re: The Little Girl
" A girl was splashing and stomping in the puddles as she walked to her school for the first time She saw another girl, her age The other girl looked ...
Nov 3, 2012 -
Re: .
Well… really I thought it’s fun !! The rhyme may be cool for kids… but I might not like it cuz I’m 19… But keep working ) Well,,, you know ...
Oct 30, 2012 -
Re: To My Future Daughter
Wow... Well,,, I really like it... I feli it was a bit touchy ... All the best !!
Oct 23, 2012 -
Re: Love
:/ Well,,, it's good... I like it >>> Keep it up !! :))
Oct 23, 2012
