Ikrantsyip

I love the rhetorical nature of this verse. it induces the feeling of emphathy and sympathy from those who read it. very good. keep writing.

Thankyou ChocalateCello. I will of-course do all you have suggested. I read over my poem with your replies in my mind and I completely understood where you were coming from. ...

I apologise if I have offended you all, or my opinion does not completely match with each of your own opinions. I had absolutely no intentions of offending anybody with ...

:) I understand.

I agree, mostly. there are some cases where grammar is necessary and sometimes needed.

it doesn't make it worse or bad in any way. in fact they make it more fun to read. but grammatically. sentence wise. they're not entirely needed. that's all :)

this is a wonderful personal poem it's expressive it's funny and entertaining. it's something to enjoy. kudos! there doesn't seem to be much rhyme or techniques, but I'm not a ...