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Re: Dear Mrs. Lett
Hey, I'm here to give a fellow writer a review c: First of all, it took me another read with actual analyzing eyes in order to understand what the topic ...
Mar 18, 2014 -
Re: removed
First of all, WOAH! Paragraphs smashed together! I recommend you to space them out so that you don't scare people away with this chunk of a monster. It's not that ...
Apr 16, 2012 -
Re: Easy Shame
Sorry for the late review. I would be lying if I told you I was busy. --- The starting was quite an attraction. That said from a sadist like me. ...
Apr 15, 2012 -
Re: Finding My Perfect Fairytale
"'Well aren’t you a pretty lady?' the voice said. I couldn’t see the face in the pitch black but I knew what was happening. The man grabbed my arms and ...
Apr 9, 2012 -
Re: Path of Shattered Lies: Will of the Kastha
Aye, this is Ikerot and I'm here to commentate on your story :D First of all, I'm horrible when it comes to grammar, especially present D: So don't trust me ...
Apr 7, 2012 -
Re: Disperse | Prologue
"And the most creepiest of them all, some have admitted that if it were possible, they would have sex with the dirt and make little dirt babies, raise the dirt ...
Apr 3, 2012