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Re: Those Old Clothes
This song is rhythmical and inspiring. It describes me perfectly and that's why I like it so much, and encourages you to change what everyone knows you as (which I'm ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: California Night
Great! I love this song, I thought it was a little short ( I would've enjoyed a little more). My favourite was the bridge as well. There's gunna be thunder ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Three Letters
I love this poem. I love the flow, the rhythm, the rhyming ; I just love it so much. It's cute short and heartfelt. One of the best poems I ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Why Did You Have to Go?
I really like is the usual poppy-doppy love bubble song the one were the singer is crying and singing about how her boyfriend is leaving her, but it's cute and ...
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: Death takes it all
Just a quick note to say that this was brilliant in every way *haha...I tried to rhyme here:)* I realy like this poem. It made me think about death and ...
May 25, 2010 -
Re: SHM part 1: The Begining ch1 sec2: Brianna and Brian
It story is realy unique. I just love. I couldn't stop reading and I want more. All describtion caused that I could see the whole story in front of my ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: SHM Part 1: the begining chapter 1 sec. 1: Laney
Wow, I love it but it was too short. You didn't have any mistakes :wink: I love the ending it leaves you wondering who else is there like her:) Keep ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Super Hero Mutants ( SHM) * preface
This is very good. You didn't have many mistakes, the first person to review this allready said what they were, so I'm not going to do it again. I liked ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Never Meant to Fall in Love
It's really good a little bit too short but good. I liked the flow of it. There's nothing bad about it so Keep It Up :wink: (you have talent) Ikafe ...
Apr 24, 2010 -
Re: Boys Next Door Chapter Two
This is really good. You had few spelling mistakes but I suggest that you re-read. I couldn't tear my eyes away the whole time I was reading because this story ...
Apr 24, 2010 -
Re: Boys Next Door Chapter One
Hey, This was really good, interestin, funny, really original, nothing that I read before. You had some mistakes so I suggest that you re-read it. But otherwives it was great. ...
Apr 24, 2010 -
Re: So Beautiful, So Dead Chapter One
Hey, So I haven't seen any spelling or grammar mistakes which is good. The whole story was spaced out nicely and I could easily read it. But the most important ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Untitled.
I have to say that I realy liked it. I don't think you had any grammar mistakes, but just for sure read over your work. I too think that you ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: Chapter One-The Escape
I realy liked this. I don't think I saw any mistakes. I love this story. I totaly want to read more. I like the pictures at the end:) I love ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: Wire Hearts and Paper Dreams (1)
Hey:) I totaly loved the story. I felt like I was inside it, like I was the MC, I felt her fear and everything, I saw the whole story playing ...
Apr 17, 2010
