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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Those Old Clothes

    This song is rhythmical and inspiring. It describes me perfectly and that's why I like it so much, and encourages you to change what everyone knows you as (which I'm ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: California Night

    Great! I love this song, I thought it was a little short ( I would've enjoyed a little more). My favourite was the bridge as well. There's gunna be thunder ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Three Letters

    I love this poem. I love the flow, the rhythm, the rhyming ; I just love it so much. It's cute short and heartfelt. One of the best poems I ...

    Jul 20, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Why Did You Have to Go?

    I really like is the usual poppy-doppy love bubble song the one were the singer is crying and singing about how her boyfriend is leaving her, but it's cute and ...

    Jul 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Death takes it all

    Just a quick note to say that this was brilliant in every way *haha...I tried to rhyme here:)* I realy like this poem. It made me think about death and ...

    May 25, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: SHM part 1: The Begining ch1 sec2: Brianna and Brian

    It story is realy unique. I just love. I couldn't stop reading and I want more. All describtion caused that I could see the whole story in front of my ...

    May 16, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: SHM Part 1: the begining chapter 1 sec. 1: Laney

    Wow, I love it but it was too short. You didn't have any mistakes :wink: I love the ending it leaves you wondering who else is there like her:) Keep ...

    May 9, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Super Hero Mutants ( SHM) * preface

    This is very good. You didn't have many mistakes, the first person to review this allready said what they were, so I'm not going to do it again. I liked ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Never Meant to Fall in Love

    It's really good a little bit too short but good. I liked the flow of it. There's nothing bad about it so Keep It Up :wink: (you have talent) Ikafe ...

    Apr 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Boys Next Door Chapter Two

    This is really good. You had few spelling mistakes but I suggest that you re-read. I couldn't tear my eyes away the whole time I was reading because this story ...

    Apr 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Boys Next Door Chapter One

    Hey, This was really good, interestin, funny, really original, nothing that I read before. You had some mistakes so I suggest that you re-read it. But otherwives it was great. ...

    Apr 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: So Beautiful, So Dead Chapter One

    Hey, So I haven't seen any spelling or grammar mistakes which is good. The whole story was spaced out nicely and I could easily read it. But the most important ...

    Apr 22, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Untitled.

    I have to say that I realy liked it. I don't think you had any grammar mistakes, but just for sure read over your work. I too think that you ...

    Apr 18, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Chapter One-The Escape

    I realy liked this. I don't think I saw any mistakes. I love this story. I totaly want to read more. I like the pictures at the end:) I love ...

    Apr 18, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Wire Hearts and Paper Dreams (1)

    Hey:) I totaly loved the story. I felt like I was inside it, like I was the MC, I felt her fear and everything, I saw the whole story playing ...

    Apr 17, 2010


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites