Published July 19, 2009
-- wrote the bridge before a thunderstorm last year--
just somethin fun. enjoy! and review
Lets pack up our bags and leave this place
Our worries are behind so we'll just drive
On a road trip to california
We'll have the time of our lives
With our hearts on the line
Call me crazy
Its just us baby
The world is spinning underneath
But we are still in this together
Lay under the stars
And see how far we'll drive
To reach our dream and stay in love
I wanna be with only you for this California night
Seems like we're headed for newport beach
So try to sleep but talk to me
Kevin's snoring really loud
But i hear you whispering sweetly to me
Just hold me please and kiss goodnight
Cuz the pretty city lights aint keeping me up
Bridge-
There's gunna be thunder tonight
I hope you'll be alright
Who knows when the lightning will strike
Hold on to me tight if you want to
we should dance in the rain when it comes down
And heal the pain, heal the pain
Call me crazy
Its just us baby
The world is spinning underneath
But we are still in this together
Lay under the stars
And see how far we'll drive
To reach our dream and stay in love
I wanna be with only you for this California night
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Great! I love this song, I thought it was a little short ( I would've enjoyed a little more). My favourite was the bridge as well.
This is my favourite part, it rhimes nicely and well I pretty much love (dunno what other to say about it).
And well, I would love to hear it in the radio once, a pretty hit of the summer;)
Love it
How did this not get reviews man? I've totally always wanted to go to California lol. Someday =] Really good, I love the bridge =]