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Just wrote this, only edited a little, I think its kinda long, but Im not sure if thats good or bad... Tell me what you think! Their screaming words and ...

I had to write this for school, and we're having a sort of class competition: whoever's story is picked byt he Journalism II team will be featured on the website. ...

"The building is bland and grey, with ‘Grey Police Station’ " This made me laugh. I'm assuming she puts on her shirt, but it never says that. Sorry, I'm one ...

Unfortunately, I couldn't get the similes to work, so you are going to have to imagine me on the floor laughing. You should set this to music, preferably something that ...

I AM ME by Abigail “Jash” Bagabaldo First post ever! XD I take a step inside the great space before me, my shoe rubbing off dust from the wooden floor. ...

My smile fades away as memories tug at the corner of my mind. Replaying you, what seemed like, perfection over and over. This stanza is a little confusing. Can you ...

Memory Of You By Lord SvaTantra I remember the days we were together, our beautiful bond was to last forever, or so we thought, but that was not to be. ...

First, what's a shambler? Can you describe it a bit more. All I get is that it's a machine, that has a propeller and three legs. What type of machine ...

... There is absolutely nothing to say about this, but I still feel like I should say something. This flows really well and you have really strong cadences(If I'm reading ...

The words register for the thousandth time in a mind where they are eternally trapped. A place where they can't escape. They try to wretch free, but only succeed in ...

Your description of the underground city reminds me of the book The City of Ember . Does your city have a name? Pharmaceutical drugs? Can you give us a reason ...

Yay, the next part is up! I love the description in the beginning. The dialogue between the brothers is great. It made me laugh. Why a dragon? Did Adrian think ...

I didn't read any of the reviews before mine, so sorry if it's repeating things that someone already said. Obviously this needs copious amounts of TLC. Please help. I need ...

Not bad, I love the flow. Lonely hearts hiding behind false smiles Catch each other’s eyes, quickly shying away Walking towards you, feels like many miles Slowly slipping away; You ...

Silence. Deadly, paranoid silence. I like this scentence It screams across the moors and bashes itself against the moon. It screams and screams in bloodlustful agony, until you can feels ...