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Re: Do You Remember?
This was really good ^^ You just keep changing from the past and the present, that's all. I would like to learn more about their past, and maybe just a ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Falling Apart /Chapter 1/ (Official)
Hellooooo XD ! It was... okay ! ^^ I just think that he said he loved her, a bit too early. Otherwise its cheesy. I think you should try to ...
Nov 26, 2009 -
Re: On saying good-bye
It was really short. I would've liked to hear what had happened before this "scene". But I guess that's the good thing about not knowing their past. It makes the ...
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: Love and hurt
Hellooo XD ! I think this was really great for a short story. You have got a lot of [u]good[/u] things in it. I mean, you have a lot of ...
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: Please don't leave
It was really cute, but a bit short :] You should try to fill it all out, if you know what i mean ^^ Try to explain more of his ...
Nov 25, 2009