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Hello, Madame Gemstone. I have arrived to review your poem! This is a very creative take on the acrostic, especially since they tend to be more lighthearted or gimmicky. Which ...

Hello there! Alpacas comin' at you with a review. I'd like to start by saying that this short story was wonderful, and an absolute delight to read. There were very ...

Hallo, Lezuli! First things first. Holy cow, this story was AMAZING!!!! I absolutely adore Sentury already, and I genuinely smiled when she, well, smiled for the first time in far ...

Hello there, Bullet! Alpacas popping in for a review. I'd like to start off by saying that this was a well written first chapter, and you did a great job ...

Howdy hey! I have arrived to review your literary piece! You said you wanted some help on the wording, and I'll do my best not to repeat what Axiom has ...

Hey there, Lee! Alpacas popping in for a review. I'd like to start off by saying that this is a spectacular poem. The way you describe everything gives a very ...

Howdy Hey! Alpacas dropping in for a review. This poem was very, for lack of a better word, plain. My first critique would have to be the imagery used. While ...

Hello and Howdy! This chapter was such a delight to read! I haven't read the rest of the story, but I'll have to go back and do that, because wow. ...

Greetings and salutations, friend! I have come for reviewing purposes. For the first poem you've written in a while, this is absolutely wonderful. The imagery is extremely effective, and gave ...

Hello, Myth! (do you still go by that name?) This poem was powerful, straightforward, and clearly came from the heart. I don't have many things to say about it that ...

Howdy hey! Alpacas coming at you with a review! First and foremost, I want to focus on the positives; this is a wonderful story you've got going here! I love ...

My birthday's in three days and, not gonna lie, I'm feeling a little attacked XD Jokes aside, this was a phenomenal poem! You did a wonderful job of portraying emotions ...

Howdy Hey! I really liked this as a start to the story, but I have a few notes. So let's jump into that, shall we? - I found Diane to ...

My sixth grade writing is quaking right now. What a power move, honestly. This poem was actually really light and whimsical, despite being a fight scene. Of course there are ...

This was pretty awesome! I love how you gave it a more narrative feel. It's not very often that I see poetry that reads like a book, but retains the ...