Icaruss

Yeah, I know it's really weird. I'd never really written a poem before and I just vomited it straight to the post, singing the words for the melody of "Just ...

Anybody else want to read it?

Fixed the customer thing. Thanks for pointing that out.

No, I mean, you don't have to change it just 'cause I said so. What the hell do I know about good stories? Seriously, if you wanted to write a ...

About Faith. I don't know. Women are strange. This story isn't factual, or anything, but I've been an asshole to women as well, and reactions vary. I wasn't writing her ...

so no

Thanks for the comments and I'm glad you both liked it. Anybody else want to give it a go?

so no?

Thanks for the comments, and I'm glad you all liked the story. And... This is kinda shameless, but this post is more or less a *bump*. Anybody else wanna give ...

So... I guess I'll go f*** myself now. Sorry. (Do not use curse words in comments.-Grif)

Man, I'm really glad more people read this. And yeah, I'm aware of the nonsensical sentences. They're just typos. I think I typed this directly to the post, I mean, ...

Wait. I misread. Yeah, you can't drink in the car, but then you say you can't smoke either. I guess it is confusing then. I don't get it.

I liked it a lot. It's nice, and short. Not very helpful, I know, just wanted to make you feel good.

"I’ll just leave the phone here so you can listen to me doing what you will never have the balls to do."? He's totally gonna do her.

I know, my opinion is pretty much outweighted. But-- I just think it works better like this. Even if it is confusing, that's a good thing. For this? Of course ...