Icaruss

I don't want to seem like an idiot, or a cold-hearted prick but this just made me roll my eyes. The simile, sure, is original but that doesn't mean it's ...

Bah. This poems are always hard because they think they're clever. I'm not saying that as an insult or as if it's something bad, but they're all about holding out ...

Oh, God. I'm going to try to be honest here without trying to be mean or unkind. I always feel guilty about writing these kinds of reviews because, after all, ...

Oh, this is great. It is funny. Not bad funny but the rhyming and the words you choose really transmit the joy you're feeling. Like, we're happy about the fact ...

That was good. I mean, there are a couple of things I would change, but overall it's a good little piece. The idea you had about the glass being filthy ...

I struggled to read this. It felt like a chore. Now, that doesn't necessary means it's bad, it's just not my kind of story. And it's not the plot, or ...

This was fantastic. You have the voice of a really hard-boiled police procedural writer. The dialogue is good, and feels authentic, which is the most important thing. You don't have ...

Observasion Número Uno: When you begin a piece this way, it either works or it doesn't. When it works, it usually just gets a chuckle out of the reader. I ...

This is hard for me to review this. Yeah, it is sweet. Of course it is sweet, but everybody can be sweet, right? And is it well written? It's not ...

It's a nice description and a fairly interesting take on alcohlism, but I must argue whether that first drink is really that special for anybody who drinks. I mean, considering ...

Wow. I was surprised by this. Seriously... Just, wow. I mean, I love how you give as a deep, vivid description of your life in such few verses, how you ...

Jesus Christ, man. You need to use commas. Punctiation. Something. I'm drunk right now, and most of your sentences make no sense when I first read them. "Hey Jenna had ...

I don't care. I'm pretty drunk right now, but that's not of relevance. Look: Whenever people write characters that are little kids, five years old, four years old, they always ...

First of all: this is all over the place, and that's good. I like how you dance through insignificant events, descibing them abruptly, then switching to the next one. That's ...

There's one problem: This girl is describing what happened to the police, right? "The sky was jet black, and filled with twinkling stars"? "His deep blue eyes reflected the pearly-white ...