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Re: Can't Explain
Thank you so much for another great review! It's amazing how many grammar things you can miss, so thank you for pointing them out to me. Wish there was a ...
Nov 11, 2009 -
Re: Night and Day
Thank you, the "thee" was a total typing mistake, so thanks for bringing it to my attention. I've been a little concerned with this one cause I've heard some people ...
Nov 11, 2009 -
Re: A Low Hung Sky
I wish I had more time right now to give a proper review, but I had to take a few seconds to let you know that I loved this!
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: On Seeing Bright Star
I like the way you used your words here, I wonder though what is it that the speaker is longing for. That's about the only thing I can think of.
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: How to Live
I am a fan of this poem alot, I think it is thought-provoking and meaningful, I only wish it were a tad bit longer, but some of the best poems ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Live Dream Live
Thank you guys so much, I will be sure to check that next time; I was typing it so quickly when I thought of it, in second-hand and forgot to ...
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: deleated
very nice piece, i like the repetition of "hear me" throughout the song, i could see this being a very heartfelt song reaching out for help, i can really feel ...
Oct 25, 2009 -
Re: Out of this World
Thank you so much, I agree, it would make more sense to drop the "if". Thanks!
Oct 25, 2009 -
Re: Who you are
the 1st verse and chorus seems alright; i like that message, but the rest is kind of confusing. I don't think it really says everything that you probably felt when ...
Nov 23, 2007
