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Re: Dear Mr. Rapist
Follow and like, follow and like. That is all I can say. This was truely amazing. You put all the emotions people who are sexually assult or abused experience. The ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: mortally transformed
I really liked this. The last reviewer told you all the little mistakes I found. Other than those few this was really good! It definately has potential. I really liked ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: The Story Teller
I think you shoukd absolutly continue this! I loved the different days of the month, it made me want to read more. The people before me have told you what ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Once a long time ago.
I didn't find any other errors that leebass did not point out. Woah, that's all I can say to this. This was really good. It made you think and it ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Aren: Guardian Angel
But have you ever looked at those stars and wondered which one your parents were in the process of destroying at that very moment? I did not understand this sentence. ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: The Vamyre Hunter
I liked this story excpet there wasn't much to connect to. I liked how the vampire dies at the end :) . I was happy she got her revenge. Everyone ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: What we used to be.
I really liked this piece. I was easy to relate to so it made the connection deeper. It made me want to keep reading and it was easy to understand. ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: Caller ID
This piece of work is short but good. The first sentence drew me in wanting to read more. I only found one grammar issue but imagine already pointed it out. ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: Canola field
I liked this piece a lot. I found a few minor grammar mistakes and they are easy to find. I liked Jamey's character personally, he just has a vunrebility to ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: Journey To A New World
Hello there Youngwriter, I liked this piece of work a lot. It was interesting and unique which I like. I found only small grammar errors that your reviewers before already ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Yellow Light, White Page
Weird, this is my FIRST post. In the annoying yellow light of my tiny room, I stared at the white paper spreading do you mean spread before me? before me. ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Light and Darkness
It start ed at the beginning of time. There was a white bull, so full of hatred and rage . His name was Darkness, but we know him as Evil. ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: The Circle of Chairs
This piece made me want to keep reading. It was creepy yet very interesting. I didn't understand what Mr. Lockhart was doing with those kids and why did they have ...
Oct 4, 2010
