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  • Other » General, General Re: Dear Mr. Rapist

    Follow and like, follow and like. That is all I can say. This was truely amazing. You put all the emotions people who are sexually assult or abused experience. The ...

    Jun 17, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: mortally transformed

    I really liked this. The last reviewer told you all the little mistakes I found. Other than those few this was really good! It definately has potential. I really liked ...

    Jun 17, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Story Teller

    I think you shoukd absolutly continue this! I loved the different days of the month, it made me want to read more. The people before me have told you what ...

    Jun 17, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Once a long time ago.

    I didn't find any other errors that leebass did not point out. Woah, that's all I can say to this. This was really good. It made you think and it ...

    Jun 16, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Aren: Guardian Angel

    But have you ever looked at those stars and wondered which one your parents were in the process of destroying at that very moment? I did not understand this sentence. ...

    Oct 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Vamyre Hunter

    I liked this story excpet there wasn't much to connect to. I liked how the vampire dies at the end :) . I was happy she got her revenge. Everyone ...

    Oct 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: What we used to be.

    I really liked this piece. I was easy to relate to so it made the connection deeper. It made me want to keep reading and it was easy to understand. ...

    Oct 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Caller ID

    This piece of work is short but good. The first sentence drew me in wanting to read more. I only found one grammar issue but imagine already pointed it out. ...

    Oct 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Canola field

    I liked this piece a lot. I found a few minor grammar mistakes and they are easy to find. I liked Jamey's character personally, he just has a vunrebility to ...

    Oct 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Journey To A New World

    Hello there Youngwriter, I liked this piece of work a lot. It was interesting and unique which I like. I found only small grammar errors that your reviewers before already ...

    Oct 5, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Yellow Light, White Page

    Weird, this is my FIRST post. In the annoying yellow light of my tiny room, I stared at the white paper spreading do you mean spread before me? before me. ...

    Oct 5, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Light and Darkness

    It start ed at the beginning of time. There was a white bull, so full of hatred and rage . His name was Darkness, but we know him as Evil. ...

    Oct 4, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Circle of Chairs

    This piece made me want to keep reading. It was creepy yet very interesting. I didn't understand what Mr. Lockhart was doing with those kids and why did they have ...

    Oct 4, 2010


seeing this tag and going "oh what's this? :)" then getting slapped in the face with shady's good grammar is the worst thing that's ever happened to me
— SilverNight