IHI

Ya, no problem! I like the new way you described the ocean btw :)

I think SalmanK meant was not to make it longer but to use words with more meaning behind them, you know words that might move the reader. (Can't do that ...

Thanks for your reply. I like to write short poems so that was purposeful and it was also meant to be a little disturbing. So thanks for not trying to ...

Thanks for the help! :D

Ugh it posted that 3 times. And the info is wrong :(

Thanks for the review! But ive been a member for a year next month.(I don't know why it says that ive just joined.....)

Thanks for the review! But ive been a member for a year next month.(I don't know why it says that ive just joined.....)

Thanks for the review! But ive been a member for a year next month.(I don't know why it says that ive just joined.....)

I think my poem was a good first try at writing a poem to be put on the web.

This is the only poem that I have gotten positive comments about. It made me cry happy tears to see your comments. :)

So much meaning and truth in such a short description. That is what I call talent. Bravo.

The way you just wrote that and the way you got in touch with your emotions was exactly the way i wish to be able to some day. So in ...

sorry the button got a bit funky.

I miss spelled person as perso