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This is a good poem, and mostly flows well. I like the rhythm, as well as your word choice. However, there are a few lines that sound like they have ...

I love the Percy Jackson fandom, but this could definitely use a lot of editing. The story line is confusing and chaotic, and doesn't make much sense. Why were the ...

I don't know what show this is from, but I think I should watch it! But back to topic, this is very well written, in an interesting form. The descriptions ...

The summery for this story was well written and defiantly hooked me in, so I decided to read. This story starts and develops quickly, almost without pause, yet is well ...