IAmthePhoenix

I was thinking about doing a review for this, but I read yours first and realized that I couldn't have said it better myself. Nice job on the review!

Thanks! It's great to see that you enjoyed it. That makes writing these poems truly worth it.

You seem to have the same problem that subsequent reviewers have had with the rhyme scheme. Look up one comment for my response to this. As for the line, "Amidst ...

Thanks for the review! It seems like your biggest problem with the poem was the rhyme scheme. I've been trying a more dynamic rhyme scheme that reflects that state of ...

You are lost. It's my fault, really. The poems really vague about it, but he does move. He's not standing in front of the mirror thinking or reminiscing on the ...

Mmm... You caught me. I am not an emotional person, so injecting emotion into my writing is very difficult. That's probably what you're picking up on. Great job on noticing ...

As always, thanks for the review. I appreciate you taking the time. It's a bit disconcerting that you thought that the story was "slow." It does speed up, but I ...

Before you get to commenting, I should address some things. First, please refrain from writing spoilers in the comments. Some of you more observant readers may have noticed an interesting ...

Thanks for clearing that up!

Thank you for the reviews, people. I just wanted to address all of your points, one by one. Call it a review of your review. Let's jump into it. Stanzas ...

Good poem! What was your purpose in writing it?

As I said, this is my first submission to the website (can I get a "woot woot?"), but mercy is really not required from you, the reader. Be brutal or ...