Hydey

That was really clever! I believed it had just the right amount of rhyme. You don't want to over complicate it. Great job and write like the wind!

When I first read this I thought, aw, this will be a cute little song... and then it grew kinda scary. It was like a gremlin that is all cute ...

Wow this was really cool! It had a good sound to it I think and I could not find anything worth complaining about it. This was great! :D

Hello I'm Hydey. This was pretty funny! :lol: Very random and kinda weird, but funny.

Thanks peoples! I tried to make it about a girl tired of her boyfriend not paying as much attention to her as he does his music career, but I can ...

Thankyou Thane! :smt003

I agree. Thank's everyone!

Thanks for the replies! :D I set it for a southern rock, but I wasn't too sure myself. My friend said it was something the Eagles would have done.

Thank you sooo much zebraskittles! :lol: I'm not used to doing lyrics but I'm learning.

This song is very unrestricted to what kinds of music you can make it into. I can see it being a successful country or pop song.

This was very sweet of you to make this song to all the orphans in Haiti. It was a beautiful song. I expect great lyrics from you! :smt002

:smt005 That was pretty funny! However, it was hard to follow the rhythm. You have a nice imagination though!

This was great! I believe this can work as a fast song or short song, whichever floats your boat. I already have it stuck in my head. :)

Thanks, peoples :smt003 ! I really appreciate your advice.

Thanks, Crescent! Your my first review of my work. At first I was not quite sure how to even write lyrics :lol: