Hydey

The brick wall that had been forming between me and Mike ever since I came back wasn't a wall after all.. I would change the "me and Mike" to "Mike ...

Invisible Man. Yeah, it suggested moral value and our literature class thinks it was geared towards the civil rights movement. I thought it was hard to get into. Our advance ...

Lonesome Dove. This is the best book ever. :D The movie was pretty impressive how it followed the story exactly. The reason why I loved the book more was because ...

I really liked your word usage of this short story. I can see this as being more of a beginning to a story or even a epilogue. It explained the ...

Hello, I'm Hydey. I wish I could have heard what this song sounds like. Also, I agree with the others, you need a different title. To me, choosing the right ...

This was actually the first book by John Steinbeck that I have read. It was great and the movie didn't ruin it. The T-V show BANANZA copied "Of Mice and ...

Lonesome Dove! My absolute favorite novel ever. Believe it or not, I read the entire series before taking to the television screen, award winning or not. I believe Robert Duvall ...

Hello, I'm Hydey. I love stories about the Titanic and I believe this was an excellent description of the horror of what happened on the ship. Here's just some nit-picking ...

Reading this story, I felt as if I as there. Your description was excellent! My dear boy, I hope you will never have to experience the truth of war in ...

Hello I'm Hydey. I liked the word choice in this. When reading your lyrics, it seemed as if it was more of a poem than a song. For a poem, ...

Hello, I'm Hydey. Welcome to YWS, Shizunarui!!! :elephant: Your story was very entertaining to read. However, I believe it sort of rushed through the scenes. You need to describe more ...

Hello, I'm Hydey. *Like* for me! :D This was so cute. I loved how innocent and sweet the kiss was and how you described how the narrator was thinking about ...

Hello, I'm Hydey. Let's take a look at your lyrics, shall we? First of all, this was beutiful! The feeling, the emotion, and the flow is what holds a good ...

I liked how it flowed. I agree with Snoik, it was sort of odd. At first, it seemed as if the narrator was actually talking to a butterfly, but then ...

Hi Scarlette! :) This story was quite amusing, especially when PMS was mentioned! :lol: I have some friends that can relate to that in their relationships. I believe a little ...