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Re: Miserable
Why do I feel so miserable, like there's something wrong with my life? W hy do I feel so miserable, like I'm in this state of strife? My heart is ...
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Re: The Secret Life of Superheroes
Batman yawned and stretched his arms; Robin did the same. Both of them were getting tired: they're been up late again. The bad guys had been beaten; there was nothing ...
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Re: The cave neer the baseball feild.
Near is spelled N_E_A_R. Chapter 1 " Do you hear that Ben?" "Hear what?" Maggie struggled to get up from her seat to show her little brother the squeaking and ...
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Re: Stealing Grace
I am editing my post because I posted my "short story" without realizing it's longer than a short story by about 10 K so I am going to repost it ...
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Re: Dream
The water all around me was slashing into my face making it hard for me to see and breath. I held on desperately to a piece of floating wreckage I ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Broken Spirits:Chapter 1
Chapter 1: Dreamstate Center this and make it a little larger, it'll look better. Rayia jolts awake, screaming at her empty room. She looks around in panic, searching for something. ...
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Re: Broken Spirits
Prologue: Oblivion Darkness. That is all she sees when she looks around. Black lines of nothing that are sucking her in. Crushing her skull, making pound What does this mean?. ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Parasite: The Corruptive Shadow - Chapter 1
Parasite: The Corruptive Shadow Chapter 1: Unexpected …! Who had thought that this would happen to someone like me? Who’d thought that a knife would be pointed right at my ...
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Re: A Broken Heart to Fix
The simplicity of it is nice, but at the same time weird. What I mean is, the fact that is simple and short is good, but the good point make ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons - 3
[quote="Ranger Hawk"]Well here's the next chapter! Sorry it's a little long; I normally don't post such long sections but I can't break it off in any other spots. As a ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons - 2
You were gifted at birth. I'm serios, this rocks. The dialouge kept me laughing through the entire read, and it was well structured. First one here! :D MUHAHAHAHA!! Yeah.. I ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons - 1
Day-um. Okay, you are now my favorite author on here (No offense to you others reading this!) Seriously, I've read a lot of books on the dragon subject (I'm into ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Changed
Chapter 1 “Now,” said the man COMMA “the boss wants to see you, AND you must do everything he tells you or you’ll be gravely punished. You understand?” I answered ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter One
Chapter One: The End The fog had lifted by the time I reached the corner. The night air was cool and crisp and a soft breeze ruffled my loose hair ...
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Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Preface
That was good for a preface/prolouge. I like the way you seemed to capture what everyone feels, Because I think everyone feels that way about death. We spend a lifetime ...
Mar 19, 2011
