HorsebackWriter

Life is hard. Simple and to the point. I like you. And not in the lesbian way. That's the simple way to put It. Ooooh, more simplicity. But maybe you ...

Grammar and spelling wise, I see nothing wrong. I loved the topic you chose, and you wrote it very clearly, very well. I just have one pet peeve that I ...

Your spelling is good, and I love your topic, but there's just one thing that bugs me. I have two friends whom you should know who are feeling very neglected ...

We've all noticed that it doesn't let you indent on here unless you use the space bar, so you're safe from a chewing out from that. In actuality, your grammar ...

I don;t see any grammar mistakes, YYYYYIIIIIPPPPPEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! I hate having to do that. I like your poem, the story it told, the message it conveyed (Guess that's the same thing ...

The first few paragraphs of your story are good, just a little bit stiff and lacking of information. You never really mention how old the narator is, nor did I ...

Dark and Grey Shackled and Chained. Gaurds Protect Guards is spelled G-U-A-R-D-S. The only thing left Left of me. You break your pattern here, maybe you should stick the 'of ...

I liked this, I fell it captured the feelings of those who were in those wars or those who can remember them. However, it's very raw, you may want to ...

Tired of long-sleeves in the summer; [b]and feeling nothing, but alone. Hoping that each day will get shorter, as they fade away. Wave good-bye to the dreadful past - I ...

A kiss. Just a simple kiss. And now he's gone. Okay, you might want to tell us that you'd switching perspectives. As I started reading this I just thought that ...

Prologue He pushed himself off the ground, balancing on little unsteady legs and standing up. He had fallen, tripping over one of the many toys and trinkets strewn across the ...

Looking over this, and reading it, I have to say that overall I liked it, but that there were things that bugged me. I hardly saw any spelling mistakes, or ...

I love this! (no surprise there, I love all your work!) But seriously, this is funny, good. I feel no urge to point out he good, the bad, and the ...

Hiya! I've had writers block for weeks and it was so hard to write this chapter! I think it's ok, but nitpicks are very much appreciated! In fact, tear it ...

This is a concept and first draft for a lengthy piece of fiction. I plan to write about the last 16 days of a young man's life who contracts the ...