Hopkin

Hello there! Hey this was pretty good, it made me think thanks for that. I like that end (Is this why you pretend?) I like that. I'm not sure who ...

There's more? Sweet, you know I'm not such a cussing kind of person, but that hasn't stopped me I just read right past it, this means that I really liked ...

Hello, That was a cute story for a young teen, I liked the jerk Josh and the main girl everything felt cute. I did feel like a was reading out ...

Thanks I will!

Hey! Hey that was really good stuff, good job, I have always tried to write stuff like this but didn't ryhme this good! thanks for the inspiration, hope you write ...

Hey there! That was good, I liked the way you ryhmed things, I do think though that Suffering, should be sufferings, just to make it ryhme a little more ;) ...

Hi! Well let's say Okay, although that's how my brothers act when their fighting over something, it's quiet like that, real funny then completely awkward. I like these kind of ...

wow, let me tell you, I really liked the way you explained things, all the details loved them! and when she died I almost cried, good job on setting the ...

Don't know if you are still looking for feed back. I really liked the way he remembered things, and the mood was effective. some things I would change, but since ...