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  • Other » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Even Great Kings Die

    WOW! You're super helpful! Thanks so much for taking the time to help me!

    Jul 9, 2016
  • Other » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Even Great Kings Die

    Oh my gosh! Thanks so much! that was really fantastic advice! Getting to that straight away, thanks so much for your help! I really appreciate it.

    Jul 8, 2016
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The very mistaken Knight

    Hey thanks! And you're totally right. I just need to reread it and figure it all out slowly. Take my time, get excited but not too excited that I fumble. ...

    Dec 19, 2013
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The very mistaken Knight

    Thanks! I'll work on it, posting something for the second time is still nerve racking! Thanks for all the fantastic HELP! Thanks so so much!

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The very mistaken Knight

    Hey thanks! I know, I know I really need to work on my describing details. I just get so excited about writing the characters, I really appreciate your comment! All ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re:

    Yeah, this is okay, I took a step back, and was like ooo, not very good, so yeah thanks anyway!

    Apr 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: The covered ground of deceased~

    thanks! I'll figure it out~ I got it from music~ love listening to music! :)

    Apr 12, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re:

    So I put this up, and it did different things then I thought, but can't fix it, so if things are too close, I didn't do it, I know I ...

    Apr 12, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: The covered ground of deceased~

    Banana ryhms with my name~ ;)

    Apr 6, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: The covered ground of deceased~

    thanks and I will, yeah I have another story that I am totally putting in Descriptoins! I'm learning more and practicing! so soon you might see another one, with more ...

    Apr 4, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: The covered ground of deceased~

    Hello, yeah I know I will use more descriptons! this was something I came up with while listening to a song, and well I didn't really self edit it, but ...

    Apr 3, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: The covered ground of deceased~

    Hey! and thanks for everything you said, I have taken in all the reviews! I really didn't have the time because well no excuse, Well one thing I'm not done ...

    Apr 3, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: The covered ground of deceased~

    Hey I had a very good Easter thank you. Suck up, just kidding~ ;) This was my first draft, I will most likely next time to wait a week, and ...

    Apr 2, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: The covered ground of deceased~

    Thanks, and also this was my first draft so. thanks for the Addvice!

    Apr 2, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: The covered ground of deceased~

    HOLY COW! You're like my sister, every single thing talked about. I like you, and by the way I wrote really fast and I was flustured myself in writing it, ...

    Apr 2, 2013


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