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Re: The Nyshiniak Stone, bringer of the ages.
Hello there! Hey I think I would like to read more, I really liked that poem with the siblings it was a story all on its own! things were a ...
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Re: Idle Hands
Hey, That story was pretty good talking about escape from this world, liked it, it was rather confusing a lot of the time, couldn't figure out what was going on, ...
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Re: A Regret Too Late
Hello! Okay let me tell you, I really enjoyed the whole thing! at times a nodded, sometimes I laughed, it was good, a totally teenage story for all teens, loved ...
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Re: Phone Calls (for lack of a better title, over 13)
Hey sup! Okay I liked how you said it was like one of those days, then his girlfriend I guess calls, that was good, we all have that. Although when ...
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Re: When I was once a God.
Oh that was so good~ I almost cried again! Man you got me, I loved how he just wanted to die, and when his mother saw him she knew he ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Fallen Angel.
Hey again! I really wanted to try to let people know how amazing you are! I forgot to hit the review button! I wish I could come up with things ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Me + You
Hello there! This was pretty good, the whole idea of a girl wanting a guy, who doesn't like this kind of thing? Although you did say the same thing over ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: The adventures of two friends
Hello~ Wow, this reminds me how I first started writing, a lot of errors. It was very imaginative, although things came from every direction. First I was here with you, ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: The Spark
Hey! I'm not so much for pregnet teens, but I actaully liked this story, and how you wrote down how rude people can be! I liked that. I'm not sure ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: The Angel of Death
Wow! Hello there! Okay let me tell you, I really liked! the suspense was aweseome! and the andel was cool! A lot of your words were put together kind of ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: The Voice
Hey sup? this story was pretty mind going, the whole crazy thing was really good, loved it, normal the word used a lot, but for this story it worked, they ...
Mar 31, 2013
