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Re: The Beastly Harlot
Hi! Just have a few comments. :) "After a few moments passed a groan escaped my mouth and I rolled out of bed": Should be a comma after "passed" "She ...
May 17, 2013 -
Re: The Underchair Letters (Chapter Two)
Hi! I like where you're going with these letters. They're interesting and have a bit of comedy to them! However, I do have a few comments. -In a couple places, ...
May 17, 2013 -
Re: Cole's Legacy - Book 2 Prologue
Hi! I really liked this prologue, it spiked my interest in what plot you're going to create for the rest of the novel! Just a few things I noticed... The ...
May 17, 2013