Honyflame

My opinion is poetry is about raw emotions being scrawled across a page. The length doesn't matter, some of my favorite poetry is short. Also poems that go on for ...

lol :D I was young when I made it up. I am still just as random though.

I really think the biscut was the best bit in the whole thing. :lol:

Thanks for that, my spelling and punctuation are not very good i know :)

its all good :)

thanks heaps Alainna!!! :) your probably right Thriving Fire it did actually start off as a poem, but then the music entered my head. i might think about redoing it, ...

riiight

that was very good, i like your style!!

man this is very good, but im a bit confused, it might just be me, but the fence is a metaphor for death or an actuall fence, maybe both? other ...

i love the image it puts into my mind, just the right amount of discription!! i have no other constructive thing to say sorry

Well obviously it has been done many times, who doesn't feel suffocated at least once in their life?? at the time of writing figurative, but before it was written, literal.

wow. you seem to have wrote a part of my past life. you are very talented!!

its sweet, but it feels like there should be more to it.

i really like this, and you are right it is ment to be read aloud. it makes more sense.