Honora

Hello Josie! I’m here to leave a quick review! Since I don’t think I’ve reviewed any of you stuff, I just want to say that I don’t mean any offence ...

Hey Rin! This is my last chapter to read :( I don’t want to be caught up :( Not much for nitpicks. Just a few words here and there that ...

...me...again...:) He thought he could go through with giving Jimin space but there felt like there was something missing in his life. Maybe this is me being picky but you ...

I'm back. Man! I'm catching up Rin! This would be the last for that or longer. I had a hard time understanding what you are trying to say. I'm still ...

Hey Rin! :D He gave up after a few moments embracing the messy look. Here, I think a comma could be used in-between moments and embracing . I think it ...

Back again! [/b]He needed to start as soon as possible before Min Yoongi could get wind of him and be unable to be found. This sentence was confusing and really ...

Another great chapter Rin! I love learning about all your characters! It makes me feel what they’re feeling and see what they’re seeing. It’s all just a big puzzle and ...

I’m back for another review :) So I didn’t really find anything grammatical or anything. It was really good in that aspect. My only concern is how childish Taeyhung seems ...

Hello Rin. I’m slow catching up but you can always count on a review. :) [/b]...she giggled, blushed slightly.[/b] Either add “and” between the two or change “blushed” to “blushing”. ...

Hey hey! I’m back! Just gonna jump into it :D [/b]Minjun shook his head in agreement.[/b] Just a small mistake but it should be nodded and not shook. Shook is ...

Back again! Ok so something I’ve noticed with all of your characters so far is they all seem to have a nativity to them. Even though some of them are ...

Hey Rin! I’m here for a quick review. Sorry for the wait! So I didn’t find any little nitpicks like I usually do so that’s good! For some reason though, ...

Hey! I’m back for more ;) Park had laughed. “Go ahead, sorry!” So I think “had” is unnecessary and sounds funny when I was reading it. :) Ok two things ...

Hello once again. Just spamming all your chapters rn! :D “He’s getting into his car, wait a few seconds after he pulls out and follows him a block behind, we ...

Hey Rin! You know how this goes! ;) He had gotten very close to The Swan, saw a glimpse of him before the warehouse he had pinned him in had ...