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Re: ORWEO (Working Title) 2.1
Once again Tuck, you did an awesome job! Nothing confused me and it flowed well. The only thing that I noticed was this: “The files were still safely tucked under ...
Feb 22, 2019 -
Re: White As Snow
Hey Lizzy! The story is good but it’s a little bit choppy. The sentences are always short and they don’t flow very well. You overuse the comma and that makes ...
Feb 22, 2019 -
Re: Resist or Regret (Ch.2)
Hey Tinybookfarie! I’m caught up so now I’ll do a review. The story is good and moves at a good pace but it’s a little hard to follow. As I ...
Feb 21, 2019 -
Re: Resist or Regret (Prologue)
Hey Tiny! I caught a few things that were a little off so I will show them to you. As MJTucker said, in this sentence, “In fact, it’s just the ...
Feb 28, 2019 -
Re: Chapter One: Catarina
Hey Ariel! I haven’t done many reviews so I’m just getting the hang of it. First off, I really enjoyed it. It was good pacing and was easy to read ...
Feb 20, 2019 -
Re: To Win Your Hand Chapter 1.2
I hope it comes soon because I’m not sure that I want to wait ;p
Feb 20, 2019 -
Re: To Win Your Hand Chapter 1.1
Hey there Alexa! I know this is really late but better late then never, right? I’ll start off by saying that it is pretty interesting. I like the way that ...
Feb 20, 2019 -
Re: ORWEO (Working Title) 1.3
Hey Tuck! I’m really glad to see how your writing has improved. The depth of Skylar’s character is way better and it’s nice to see it. Even though we don’t ...
Feb 20, 2019 -
Re: ORWEO (Working Title) 1.2
I'm back again! "but he saw her coming just in time and hit her across the face with her gun." this sentence confused me a little because before this, you ...
Feb 19, 2019 -
Re: ORWEO (Working Title) 1.1
Hey there! I really like how your book jumps into action in the first chapter, it makes it easier to get hooked. ;) One thing I would like to point ...
Feb 19, 2019 -
Re: Singularity, Ch. 1: On Solitude
Hey there! I will warn you that this is the first review that I have ever done so it won't be much! It is really interesting and I liked the ...
Feb 19, 2019
