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Hey! Thanks for the tag- but what's it for? Are you looking for feedback on your poem?

Awesome! c:

Ah I see! Well, in the event of having dialogue with two genders- yeah names are useful- like replace "she" with "Bitter" or "Brownie". Yeah I was a little confused ...

Oh, I'm glad! ^_^

Thank you! C: Glad you enjoyed it!

I'm glad that was helpful! C:

Okay, but you didn't explain what was hard to read.

Hello LizEmo, and thank you for stopping by to comment on my work. Though this work I wrote two years ago and am not planning on editing it. There are ...

Okay dokey! Glad I could help! c:

Hey! Sorry for the delay in getting back to you. Your similes seem a lot better! The kids and their excitement seem a lot more believable- though you mention that ...

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Keep up the awesome reviewing! C:

Thanks! c: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm not sure I know what It's a Wonderful Life is, but I think I've heard of it maybe. Yeah I wanted Eleanor ...

Thanks Radrook! I am religious aswell, however the angel wasn't intended to necessarily be assigned by the creator- I mentioned "they" assigned him. I see your point buuuuut also if ...

Thank you! c: It was rushed. I've been struggling to write it for a month and a week and I just finally sat down and got it done.

You're welcome, Mari! And thanks for the confidence boost; sometimes I feel like I'm being too harsh lately with my wording! And yes I love that article! It may not ...